DineshJackson18821

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I still dream of you.

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Back in day’s I was sure about anything
Now , I even Doubt my existence.
Their was a time when I was certain
But now , I don’t even know what to say.
The time is passing & passing by very fast,
Nothing seems real everything thing look fiction
The time spended with you
Is the only good memory I have.
Now I make myself believe
That there was no one , there is no real you
I still see the dream’s in daylight with open eyes
I still dream of you.

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SirSeedsAlot129.49K
this is all I got...

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Last edited by SirSeedsAlot, 2 years and 8 months ago

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ChasingCoyote12.59K
almost immediately, but that was because I was going straight for the camel-toe!
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DethHolly68.76K
Damn... you must have HUGE standards then shockedshockedtitter
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DarkAngie25.74K
that's nice to make poems and share them
i which i could share them

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and i have something for you:
Come to this garden where flowers grow high
And there's only love, once in a lifetime
Come to this garden where people go by
And there's only love, once in a lifetime
Once in a lifetime I'm in love
Come to the garden where children play around
And there's only love, once in a lifetime
Come to the side where no one never dies
And there's only love, once in a lifetime
Once in a lifetime I'm in love
Every morning is a fantasy
Every little dream becomes reality
Every second is a second chance
Now that I have love I know where to begin
Come to the garden where flowers grow high
And there's only love, once in a lifetime
Come to the place where no one ever cries
And there is only love, once in a lifetime
Once in a life time I'm in love
Once in a lifetime I'm in love
thank you pal this is beautiful

You took the red pill, didn't you?
just had to see how far the "rabbit hole" goes down"

Very nice poem.
I enjoyed reading about your dream.
Thank you.
thank you mate glad that you liked it

I have to admit, I'm in awe that such amazing poetry can be written without rhyming a single line! beautiful work, Dinesh!

that's nice to make poems and share them
i which i could share them
Why couldn't you ?
I'm sure you have some very deep and meaningful poetry that I would love to read! I would guess the rest of the site as well?
U can & u should .

I dream of her. Can you blame me?biggrin
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Last edited by Sylar73, 2 years and 8 months ago

i must say beatiful dream biggrin

nice poem... keep them coming :)
glad that you liked it

there'll be someone out there surely just for you, dear smile
you batcha !
that's the spirit wink

r u guys waiting
now i am relieved
GAR!!! CANT...WAIT..ANY..LONGER...

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